hch0008 发表于 2011-12-27 14:32   全显示 1楼
感觉文中对妈妈心理的描写还是直白了点,笔法到有些画外音的味道,也许改编成剧本效果更好写。女主用雯丽,男主用小夏雨。加入写剧烈的情节冲突就能更抓住大家的眼球。
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