xxxsw 发表于 2023-7-27 20:25   全显示 1楼
感谢大大的文章，没有意见也不是建议，就纯是说下个人的看法，大大多元宇宙的点子挺有意思的，但文章有种翠微居的感觉，就是剧情太直白了，想睡觉就有枕头递过来，可能多点曲折会好点。人物刻画再多一些细节，比如一些小的动作、神态、眼神这些，通过细节来展现人物个性。然后肉戏这块，贵在精，次数不必过多，但是每一次都要够量，裤子刚脱肉戏就结束了也是挺不尽兴的。
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