s356641 发表于 2022-6-27 14:45   全显示 1楼
这章真是失望，直接开第三人称上帝视觉先不谈，中间硬生生插一段李小璐与陈希文偷情的情节已经让人莫明其妙。最后几段还来一个”绝杀”，直接就把妻子背德与上司偷情完全挑明了……那读者还看什么？中间整个堕落过程情节完全没有。

这篇文章的词藻确实华丽，但情节真是苍白。
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