该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-11-16 18:51   全显示 1楼
挺好的，感觉平平淡淡，这样这后面的事情才能有所发展。作者这章这样写，后章再加上H情节，就会更刺激的。然后再回头看看，那时你就会觉得这种平淡的过渡章节也是H小说必要的组成部分。像金璘其实池中物那小说，里面的无H的过渡章节不也很多吗？那些都是交待故事的必要啊！好的小说都是要这样的！希望楼主能继续写这部长春女人，很好看！也很支持楼主！
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